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Thursday, September 7, 2023

A Prayer At The Edge





Pain is now over the top,
and this has gone on far too long.
I'd like to cry, 'Lord, make it stop!',
but I know this would be wrong.
These words would doubt His mercy;
this plea would shade His plan,
and now, 'fore strength deserts me,
I pray, 'Make me a man
subordinate to Holy Will,
to that I may not understand;
take my fears, please, and then fill
me with willingness to hear command
and follow through unto the ending,
resolute and sure, unbending.'

The Five Minute Friday prompt this week is RELY.

I once believed in self-reliance,
and of dependence had no trace,
not realizing this defiance
was a slap against God's face,
and I am really really glad
that The Dude took no offence,
for I think to make Him mad,
well, things could really get intense.
But anyhow, I came to learn
that though I can do almost anything,
the one thing I did not discern
was that beneath God's shelt'ring wing
I could from my own pride rest
and thus pass God's greatest test.

Four minutes and a bit.

Music from the soundtrack to Zulu, with Men Of Harlech

Sylvia say that Pitties never yield, either, but that they DO need ice cream breaks.


29 comments:

  1. This is beautiful, Andrew, "Beneath God's shelt'ring wing I could from my own pride rest and thus pass God's greatest test."

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    1. Lisa, thank you so much, and please excuse my late reply. Barb and I have had the flu!

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  2. I love the photos you shared, and your poem about letting go of self-reliance. I relate to that a lot. Praying for you. I'm sorry you're in so much pain.

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    1. Lesley, yeah, self-reliance can be a hard master.

      And...thank you.

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    1. Jennifer, I am so glad you enjoyed this! Thank YOU!

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  4. Beautiful and powerful poem, Andrew! May you continue to stay under the Lord's sheltering wing. Praying for you this morning.

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    1. Joanne, thank you so much. Prayers are cool, as Barb and I have both had the flu.

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  5. Ah, self reliance, the original trap. 'Did God really say........?' We want to believe we can get away with it, but, like Jonah, God is on our case, and that place where we can rest from our own pride is so precious. Thank you for expressing these deep truths. We all need the ice cream break we cannot supply for ourselves!

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    1. Tish, yeah, for sure we can't get away with self-reliance!

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  6. Praying for you Andrew 💗Terri FMF #10

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    1. Terri, thank you so much for your prayers, and please forgive that I didn't get to your blog this week. Barb and I have had the flu.

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  7. I love those clouds! Thank you as always for your raw honesty.

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    1. Allie, thank you...and I am so glad you enjoyed the clouds.

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  8. Been thru some things myself past ten days, so can relate to this one! "Self reliance" ach! God bless you Andrew💜 thank you for every amazing share

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  9. Andrew, the photos are beautiful. And they're such a reminder of God's faithfulness in our hard/painful/difficult/unbearable seasons. I so appreciate your honesty in both of your poems. Your heart to hear God's words--to know His will for you--and to follow it no matter what challenge me to maintain the same heart. Thank you, friend.

    I'm praying for you and Barb.

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    1. Jeanne, your affirmation and prayful thought leave me with no words but Thank You.

      Rough week. Barb and I have had the flu.

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    2. Ugh! I'm so sorry about having the flu!

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  10. Truly beautiful Andrew. We know Jesus only did the Father's will. We don't realize the depth He will take us to rely totally on Him and what He did for us. Praying you receive a spiritual energy surge as you place yourself totally in His hands. 🙏🙏

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  11. Andrew, This>>"I'd like to cry, 'Lord, make it stop!', but I know this would be wrong.These words would doubt His mercy;this plea would shade His plan,". Resonated with me today. I have several chronic illnesses along with chronic pain. I have to share with you, a few weeks ago when my Trigeminal Neuralgia was zapping my head relentlessly, I said "Jesus, my head" then I immediately sang a praise song to him, I said I don't know what part of his plan my pain is part of, but I asked him to use me. I'm starting to be able to immediately praise him even in pain. It's what I call my "praise him anyway." Yes I'm completely dependent on him.
    Visiting today from FMF#2

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    1. Paula, thank you so much for sharing your trials, and your faith... you're in our prayers.

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  12. I am such a wimp when it comes to pain, and not a good witness at all.
    Praying for you and Barb.

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    1. Grams, WHAT? Not a good witness?

      You're my inspiration.

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  13. Beautiful poetry. Prayers going up for you as you continue to rely on God's grace.

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  14. The best of your creations in the worst of pain and agony. Thank you for writing and sharing.

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    1. Henri Matisse once visited Auguste Renoir, and saw how difficult it was for the old master to hold a brush, due to his rheumatoid arthritis.

      "Why do you punish yourself so!" cried Matisse.

      "The pain passes, my friend, but the beauty remains."

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  15. Beautiful poetry and prayer, thank you.

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    1. Deborah, thank you. I am so glad you liked this.

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