Thursday, November 14, 2024

Valhalla Awaits


 Obnoxious chest-thumping, self-delusion, or total immaturity?

Or a dawning comprehension of what's real?

I stand, and standing prove my worth,
and need not bow my head in shame.
Colossus, I bestride the Earth
and demons tremble at my name,
for I have fought through their abyss 
and left their entrails on the walls,
but let me here not be remiss,
for I well know the Voice that calls
my heart and soul into the fight,
with joyousness upwelling,
for I am drawn up to the light
and there will be a tale worth telling
as Valhalla rises near
with banquet tables slicked by beer.

The Five Minute Friday prompt this week is VOID.

Yesterday I was annoyed,
and threw a tantrum here.
Life itself felt like a void
when I ran out of beer.
Oh, sure, there was fizzy pop
and a box of wine,
but my anguish would not stop,
and I made it mine,
clutching grievance to my soul,
raging to the sky
that the day could not be whole,
and then I did espy
a fresh unopened case of Bud
and the day got really good.

Three minutes flat, but the beer's foaming in delight!

Beer and ice cream, says Sylvia.


8 comments:

  1. I love that image of a spiritual Colossus. Very apt for one who inspires so many of us with the gritty reality of life's battle and the faith that sees us through. Glad the beer turned up!.

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    1. Thank you so much for this. I'm in the middle of a really hard part of the trip, and your affirmation means the world to me.

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  2. Praying harder for you, friend, as that precious day draws near... while Satan still tries to dig his claws, hiding from you your beer! But Jesus stands by, still whispering close, your king and true and lifelong Bud. Stretching out His nail-scarred hand, and look! He's even got some waiting suds!

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    1. Thank you for this... today was really rough, but the word-picture you made lifts my heart!

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  3. Thanks for the sonnet you left on my post.
    Your sonnets are always a blessing and encouragement.
    P.S.Your sonnet about the beer made me smile.

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    1. Grams, you're so welcome, and thank YOU.

      And I am delighted to give you a smile.

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  4. The sonnets you've been leaving as comments on other people's posts are so awesome. I think I must have already saved enough for a whole book. This week I especially loved the one about whether there is a void in God as well that only we can fill. I had never thought of that before. And that sonnet about you vacuuming up the monsters probably wasn't meant to be funny, but it gave me such a chuckle. God has blessed you with such a talent.

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    1. Grams, wow...thank you so much for this awesome affirmation! I'm humbled, and so very honoured.

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