tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4095822388315899381.post5445541904581155822..comments2024-03-28T11:09:46.338-07:00Comments on Blessed Are The Pure Of Heart: Reaching For God - #BlogBattleAndrewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13230537202427640540noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4095822388315899381.post-25308986789069461772015-10-20T20:06:03.028-07:002015-10-20T20:06:03.028-07:00Wonderful piece as it stands! I would love to rea...Wonderful piece as it stands! I would love to read the longer version and compare the two though. <br /><br />PS Bonhoeffer is amazing! So intrigued that this describes an actual event!Sarah Eliza @ devastateboredomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18178682145271558368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4095822388315899381.post-49151069389095479382015-10-09T11:20:05.306-07:002015-10-09T11:20:05.306-07:00"Dude, did you piss off God?"
"Not... "Dude, did you piss off God?"<br /><br />"Not lately." <br /><br />Love it!<br /><br />Personally I'm all about the long version, but that's just me.Paul Byerlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365208584175101402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4095822388315899381.post-31265743511994528582015-10-08T16:22:27.912-07:002015-10-08T16:22:27.912-07:00I enjoyed this, as I have all the others.
FWIW, m...I enjoyed this, as I have all the others.<br /><br />FWIW, my opinion is that if you can tell the story in fewer words, do so. Less is usually more, within reason, when it comes to tales.Cathleen Townsendhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03488714093444030351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4095822388315899381.post-34416972709939483552015-10-07T23:34:45.004-07:002015-10-07T23:34:45.004-07:00Thanks again for another laugh-out-loud line ('...Thanks again for another laugh-out-loud line ('All I had was 'the power of positive thinking''). I've felt that what-am-i-reading feeling too! <br /><br />Re the edit: It's tricky to know what you've got left when editing a longer piece down like this - I think this version works well, but it'd be good to compare the two. I often have to do this at work, and we usually send it to a second pair of eyes to find out if we lost any essential meaning, or blurred the impact at all. <br /><br />Anyway, always love to read your #blogbattle! I'm coming to really appreciate Dude, Biff, Sonny and TC!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4095822388315899381.post-38326048822456804552015-10-07T15:28:27.256-07:002015-10-07T15:28:27.256-07:00I think that was lovely, Andrew. :) I could have e...I think that was lovely, Andrew. :) I could have easily kept reading it, too. Can't wait to get a look at the full version as well. This shorter one was very good at conveying all that needed saying. Plenty to absorb.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18087143201681283081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4095822388315899381.post-86763616826659183762015-10-07T09:52:52.875-07:002015-10-07T09:52:52.875-07:00I went through about five copies, wore them all ou...I went through about five copies, wore them all out!Andrewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13230537202427640540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4095822388315899381.post-44235030638583420782015-10-07T03:22:35.129-07:002015-10-07T03:22:35.129-07:00The Power Of Positive Thinking. I remember reading...The Power Of Positive Thinking. I remember reading that back grade school. Really worth checking out.Lux G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00557863683608790087noreply@blogger.com